REPAIRING PROBLEMS

STRATEGY 3: Topicalising phrases

First-aid for: 'given-new' and organising flow
Use a topicalising phrase to create connections between sentences if the existing links are unclear. A 'topicalising phrase' is an introductory prepositional phrase placed in topic position (at the start of a sentence) which links what is to follow with what has already been mentioned. The addition of a topicalising phrase may help to repair text chunks with poor topical progression and weak links between sentences. When a topicalising phrase is used, a given” idea is acknowledged and the topic moves on.

Here are some examples of frequently used topicalising phrases which can be adapted for use in different text contexts:

LOCATION
  • As discussed in the previous section, ...
  • In an earlier study, ...
  • In this procedure, ...
COMPARISON-CONTRAST
  • In comparison with [GIVEN], ...
  • Similar to [GIVEN], ...
  • Unlike [GIVEN], ...
MEANS
  • Using these methods, ...
  • Adopting the framework described, we...
PURPOSE
  • To overcome / solve this difficulty / problem, ...
  • To address these problems, ...
  • To analyse this problem, ...
LOGICAL CONNECTION
  • Because of this problem, ...
  • Despite this problem, ...
  • In addition to [GIVEN], ...
TIME
  • After the solution was treated, ...
  • For / In each case, ...